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SMSgt Anil Heendeniya
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With respect, just a suggestion, given the purpose of your post (writing/editing skills):
The second line should read "...article writer who has three years...(etc.)"
("who" is used for people, and "that" is used for objects, animals, etc. "That" might rarely be used for groups of people, but "who" is still preferred).
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