Posted on Dec 18, 2017

Can someone please review my personal statement for Navy ODS?

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Posted 7 y ago

Cadet CPT (Join to see) I have read your statement twice, and found it to be well written. In the second to last sentence, consider changing "truly gratified" to "deeply honored."

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Posted 7 y ago

sounds pretty good to me !!

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